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Here's one taken at school.

Canon 50D, Sigma 30mm 1.4, f3.5, 1/400, ISO 800

 

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It's sharp, and it's composed nicely, but it needs more detail in the whites, IMO. Also, unless they were just shooting s..., it would have been more interesting to see what they were up to.

 

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It's sharp, and it's composed nicely, but it needs more detail in the whites, IMO. Also, unless they were just shooting s..., it would have been more interesting to see what they were up to.

Thanks for the kind words. I can try a re-edit and bring down the high lites and see how it looks. For B&W, I like slightly blown high lights and pure blacks. It's just a preference. They were just shooting the s--t, during a demo, so what they should have been doing was listening intently and taking notes. What they were doing is a little more interesting. Thanks again.