New here... Some shots

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by Dex_star, Jun 10, 2008.

  1. Dex_star

    Dex_star TPF Noob!

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    Hi there... Im new here and wanted to share some of my work... I am by no means a professional, but just a kid with a camera and too much photoshop work ;) Here are some old shots, please let me know what you think, and also, CC as always. Thanks

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  2. tirediron

    tirediron Watch the Birdy! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Welcome to the forums. C&C per req:
    1. Interesting persepective, might have been better from a slightly different position so that the sign behind his left shoulder was a little less prominent.
    2. Too much going on in this photo; the eye doesn't really know where to go. Try and isolate your main subject through positioning and/or use of selective focus. As well, the flaring in this one is a problem too.
    3. Good capture, has a nice, gritty, urban feel to it.
    4. Nice capture, however it could have been improved by shifting your shooting position such that you were closer to the cars and zoomed in to a greater degree to eliminate the background
     
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    thx for the C&C
    greatly appreciated and definitely gonna keep those things in mind
     
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    The third is a very special one!!
    keep up the good work.
     

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