New lens. cc por favor.

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  1. cailinp

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    I think you've captured the eyes really well in 1-3.

    2 and 4 look overexposed.
     
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    not a fan of all of the composition, but I like #2 the best.
     
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    1-good color, good exposure
    2-very green undercurrent in the fleshtones
    3-a bit weak in the saturation and color department
    4-back to that odd greenish undercurrent

    I wish every single one of these had been framed as verticals.
     
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    agreed
     
  6. DennyCrane

    DennyCrane No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Good shots that would be a lot better if the tops of their heads weren't cut off.
     
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    Why are they so grainy?
     
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    I don't notice a lot of grain?
     
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    You need to pay attention to your backgrounds. The only one that is not distracting is #1 & then you cut off the girls head.
     
  10. cailinp

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    Just for the record, these shots were taken in my backyard while my daughter and all the neighbor kids were playing. They were spontaneous snapshots.
     
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    I am going to agree with Derrel here on color and exposure, he's already said it. Although sometimes I too like the horizontal shots when I am trying to illustrate surroundings. Super cute girls. I dont notice much grain either but could be me.
     
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    going along with #2 and 4 a tad overexposed. The images are nice just a little composition altering and they would be GREAT
     

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