New member, Couple of my shots. Critique me!

[Rath]

Hey folks, new here and basically new to photography. Would like to get some feedback on these shots and editing.

I know my edits arent the greatest, still learning lightroom but im open to any and all comments/criticism. These were all taken with my Sony A6000 with the Kit 16-50mm f/3.5-5.6 lens. If you would like any details such as shutter speed etc. about any shot lemme know.

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[otherprof]

Hey folks, new here and basically new to photography. Would like to get some feedback on these shots and editing.

I know my edits arent the greatest, still learning lightroom but im open to any and all comments/criticism. These were all taken with my Sony A6000 with the Kit 16-50mm f/3.5-5.6 lens. If you would like any details such as shutter speed etc. about any shot lemme know.

posting in 1024px, clicking image will take you to 2048px version of photo.

No critique - just praise! I like every one.

 

[Rath]

well dang, thanks!

 

[BrentC]

It's a fantastic set. Absolutely love #2.

 

[impvaer]

I prefer pictures 1 and 12


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[Tomasko]

Lovely, a very pleasing set of images Wellcome to TPF!

 

[JustJazzie]

Wow! What a fantastic intro set. Great work.

A few things I may have done different;

In number 1, If there was enough water available, I probably would have followed the rule of thirds and moved the focal point (aka, the sun) a little closer to the top of the frame. Still gorgeous either way though!

Number 3 wants to be a masterpiece, but the power line going through the shot is holding it back. Do you have photoshop? Lightroom has a clone tool, but photoshop does an immensely better job when it comes to cloning, in my opinion. Easy improvement!

Number 4 seems to also have a hair under the second barbed wire down that could use a good clone brushing as well.

Disclaimer: I'm nit picking. Take what you like and burn the rest. ;-)

Love how soft the kitty photo is.

 

[sniper x]

I have to say I think all are very nice. Especially 2, and 4.

 

[Dean_Gretsch]

#2 is wonderful to me. I also like the first!

 

[Rath]

Wow! What a fantastic intro set. Great work.

A few things I may have done different;

In number 1, If there was enough water available, I probably would have followed the rule of thirds and moved the focal point (aka, the sun) a little closer to the top of the frame. Still gorgeous either way though!

Number 3 wants to be a masterpiece, but the power line going through the shot is holding it back. Do you have photoshop? Lightroom has a clone tool, but photoshop does an immensely better job when it comes to cloning, in my opinion. Easy improvement!

Number 4 seems to also have a hair under the second barbed wire down that could use a good clone brushing as well.

Disclaimer: I'm nit picking. Take what you like and burn the rest. ;-)

Love how soft the kitty photo is.

Thank you so much! very good points and I will keep my eye out for such things in the future.

The first picture I wish I had more water, but there were some really ugly rocks juuuust out of frame.

and the picture of my cat (princess) is actually the first actual photo I took with the new camera! It came out incredibly well.

 

[SquarePeg]

You're off to a great start! Really nice work for a beginner. You have a good eye. Welcome.

 

[Derrel]

You're off to a great start! Really nice work for a beginner. You have a good eye. Welcome.

I agree with SquarePeg's assessment!