New member. Some pics.

Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by parallaxerror, Apr 1, 2004.

  1. parallaxerror

    parallaxerror TPF Noob!

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    These were all taken with a low end digital camera, so I don't think there is much I can do about the grain.

    Under a bridge in Golden Gate Park
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    taken from a distance with digital zoom
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    Sutro Tower
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    Constructive criticism appreciated. :)
     
  2. Lungfarmer

    Lungfarmer TPF Noob!

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    I love that first one. Great composition and lighting.
     
  3. oriecat

    oriecat work in progress

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    I agree, that first one is very nice!

    The second one doesn't excite me. I think she's cropped too much. She needs feet. Also there is a lack of contrast. You can hardly tell her hair from the background.

    On the third one, I think you would have a really nice silhouette if it wasn't for the tower in the background. Then I noticed that you titled it about the tower! So if you're trying to show the tower, I don't think it's very effective, since the tower itself is so soft. It doesn't look like the tower is the subject, it looks like the tower was an accident that shouldn't be there. IMO of course!

    Welcome to the forum! :)
     

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