New Model: Melissa on the beach!

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  1. RMThompson

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    New pictures from last night, Melissa on the beach!

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    Great series! Looks Pro! I see you slipped in that photo you were planning. Only problem I see with the last one is its hard to tell you did anything but pose two individual models. Came out well though.
     
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    yeah we did the double one as an afterthought more than anything... I want to get it done again. I had NO light and new a flash would probably be inconsistent!
     
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    Excellent job! Beautiful model. Great lighting, color, and sharpness. I agree, very pro. :thumbup:

    The only thing that I notice is that her toes are not relaxed on #5 when she is on the post. Im sure its difficult to relax while perched on a post, but I think it would look better if her toes were not quite as stiff. Also, her arm is cut off in #1.

    Just my 2 cents. :D

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    NJ took the words. :) Looks fantastic except for those 2 points.
     
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    Good series, number 3 is really good
     
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    Agree!!

    In the first she looks really orange.

    Beautiful shots, and comp.!
     
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    I'm really liking this series, but the chopped off hands and feet bug me. I think #6 is my favorite, but I'd like to see a bit more light on the front of her. Nice job:)
     
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    I think relaxing and sitting on that post does not go together. Regardless of how nice these photos are I just can't imagine that being comfortable.
     
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    I agree.. maybe leaning on the post or sitting down and leaning on the post would work better.
     
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    Looks like a lot of fun! Nice Work
     
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    Great looking model, looks like a good shoot.

    I'm not sure if it was a conscious decision or not...but I'm a stickler for a straight horizon...and most of these are off.
     

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