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  1. SpeedTrap

    SpeedTrap TPF Noob!

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    Well I was feeling a bit moody and I had an Idea that I wanted to try,
    Please let me know what you think. C&C always welcome.

    Please note this is not selective coloring, other than a small touch up in the eyes, this is as shot.

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  2. Sw1tchFX

    Sw1tchFX TPF Noob!

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    I like it, but it's way underexposed. Not enough light on the subject.
     
  3. Alpha

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    Beuller? Beuller? Anyone? Anyone?

    Too. Much. Middle. Gray.

    You need to get a grip on those grays (god I love alliteration).
     
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    SpeedTrap TPF Noob!

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    Is this any better?

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    Alpha Troll Extraordinaire

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    I know the BG isn't entirely black. Anyway, try this on for size

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    Garbz No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    You know out of these I like the original the best. This is a low key image and doesn't even look remotely like it should be much brighter in my opinion. It completely destroys the mood.
     
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    I agree, I like the original the best. Sets the mood of the photography better IMO. Great work.
     
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    I love the effect here. Spill all the details. The lighting is appropriate, but I am getting robbed on a lot of details. Try one with the exposure opened up a stop.

    Love & Bass
     

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