New Photos (C&C Please)

Ernie83Metal

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Today I went to work on a house to fix some things and found some pretty interesting things

i would like some tough C&C on the first 2 (those are the one that interested me the most_)
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The piano shot is really appealing to me. But since you asked for tough criticism on it, I would have liked to have seen the focus a bit sharper on the broken key, so the rough texture of it would pop compared to the smoother white keys.
 
1 - Meh. I'm not a huge fan of selective coloring. Even without that, the image doesnt' do much for me.

2 - great shot, I like it. It does look like your focus point was off a tad(whether on purpose or not), would have liked to see it on the front edge of the broken key, but still, nice shot.

3 - Yuck. Building is a major distraction in the background.

4 - Plant in the foreground is distracting, and overall the image isn't very appealing to me.

5 - OK, sky is blown out some, this would be one where you could underexpose and use a flash to get the interior lit while keeping the sky saturated.

6 - Not doing anything for me, background is distracting, and well a chair just isn't really an interesting subject, at least in this instance.

Otherwise the shots are good technically, sharp and for the most part exposed properly.
 

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