new pics with the d40 (c&c welcome)

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  1. tron

    tron TPF Noob!

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    so i got my d40 a while ago and ive been trying to learn the different modes etc since my previous camera was a sony dsc-t1

    this place is where theyused to test old packard cars

    thanks for lookign. im not totally happy with my lines or theme but i figured this would be a good oppertunity to get some critiquing since i havent posted pics in a while.

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  2. manaheim

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    Neat. Is this an abandoned place?

    On the shots- colors seem a bit off... maybe washed out too. Not so much on the last one, but... or was the coloring intentional? Aging?

    Horizon in 8 should be leveled.

    I personally find the vignetting distracting, but that's just me.

    7 seemed kinda neat but probably needs the colors and such recovered... probably a bit of contrast too. Likely will make that one pop.

    Seems like a ton of potential in 6, but I think the composition missed it. Looks like a rather sad, or possibly very quiet and secluded space... you could probably bring a lot of that out in a different framing. As it is, a lot of your attention is just drawn to the backhoe (a tragic scene ruiner by itself). By the way, this one needs some levelling as well.

    I think 1 and 3 were cool. Nicely done aside from the color issues.
     
  3. tron

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    thanks a lot for the critiques! :hug::

    the colors were my lame attempt at being creative lmao so was the vignetting. ill try to reedit some of them and post em up later on.
     
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    Hey you only got one set of comments... don't go on my word alone! :)
     

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