New Portraits C&C (I'm a beginner!)

[xstepone]

I had the privilage to work with my good friend, Brittany.
We actually used to model together so this shoot was super fun!
C&C please? I'm still learning!

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Thank you!

 

[D-B-J]

the first shot is my favorite.

 

[TylerF]

im not sure if im a fan of the "old school" pp. not bad tho

 

[xstepone]

thank you!

 

[cnutco]

The exposure seems to be a tad off.

I too like the first shot, but I think the bra strap should have been covered by the cami strap.

What time of day was this? Is does not look like highnoon in the shadows, but the highlights are very harsh.

 

[thirdkid]

Same here, not really a fan of the soft old school feel. But nice pics. Pic 1 is nice. Pic 3 would be awesome if she was symmetrical and no old school pp

 

[Christie Photo]

I like the last two, but the first two are spoiled by the lighting. The may have been saved if you sent Brittany off to the side to cast a shadow, blocking the stray light.

Even though I find the lighting week in the last view, I do like the composition and how you have the background in key with the clothing. Nice. Did you try lightening the shadows under her eyes a bit? Not too much... maybe some light dodging will do it.

-Pete

 

[MAR]

i agree with "thirdkid" on pic #3's symmetry.. perhaps a crop with thick bordering could bring out the subject more