New Self Taken Portraits

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by EvonT., Feb 12, 2008.

  1. EvonT.

    EvonT. TPF Noob!

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    this time, i experiment with full body shot, and here is the outcome haha.. C&c are greatly welcomed^^

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    niforpix TPF Noob!

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    Not bad, not bad at all. I finally see what you really look like without all the post processing hehe :D

    Nice work!
     
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    Both of these are quite well conceived.
    There are however a couple of things that hurt.

    In both of these, these sides of your legs at the knees are the most distinctly colored and in focus, thus drawing the eye away from the top of the photo.

    The lens flares or reflections hurt also.
    You have a natural eye and are, of course, a terrific subject.
     
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    EvonT. TPF Noob!

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    thanks for the constructive comments, will try to eliminate these mistakes next time ^^

     
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    Pretty good. That blowout is a little distracting though. :)
     

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