New serie: 'Summer of romanticism'

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  1. Vivienne

    Vivienne TPF Noob!

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    New series with romantic clothes and a romantic style.
    Your opinion please!
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  2. Vivienne

    Vivienne TPF Noob!

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    Come on! 25 views and NO comments??
     
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    C&C per req:
    1. Very nice.
    2. Not fond of this one; blown highlights on the back of her shirt, an uncomfortable angle, and too tight a crop.
    3. Very nice composition, but about 1/2 stop too bright overall I think.
    4. Hmmm... not sure about this one; I'd definitely prefer it with a blurred background, but something about the pose/expression is a little off.
    5. Really nice - I think though just a tad less crop on the top.
    6. Cute, but watch the highlights on her left and the shadows on the right.
    7. Very nice, but perhaps a tighter crop?
    8. I like this one a lot.
    9. Another very nice image, love the expression; but again, the sharp background is distracting.
    10. There is no #10
    Just my $00.02 worth - your milage may vary.
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    These clothes don't look like there from the romantic time period at all.
     
  5. Vivienne

    Vivienne TPF Noob!

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    tirediron, thanks for your c&c!
    you're right about the blur and brightness etc.. thanks for that.
     
  6. JorgeRegula

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    I like number one, and number 6. Really cute.
     

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