new shoot

[Vivienne]

I've made some new photo's too improve my photo 'Behind my hat' (http://thephotoforum.com/forum/showthread.php?t=98228)
What do you think of those photo's?
Which one do you prefer?
Do you have any suggestions or critique?

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4:

 

[JCleveland]

a little too dark for my taste.. Put the camera on a tripod, so your (i'm assuming) shoulders aren't so square to the camera. i like the grain of the images, but I would probably tone it down just a touch.. Not sure if that was intentional or just too high of an ISO.. anyway if I were to choose a favorite, I would probably choose the second one.

 

[LaFoto]

My choice is the last, despite the distortion by the wide angle, just because that one's the only one on the way to being bright enough. The others are way too dark for my liking. They look underexposed and "upped" in PS.

 

[Sweetsomedays]

I like the a whole lot better then the last one 1 & 2 are my pics, but still dark.
2. I really like the shadow on the wall behind you and your expression is more interesting Just wish I could see they eyes more.

Keep goin these are fun to see!

 

[Vivienne]

Thanks for all your comments!!!