New shots needing critique.

Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by Ziffy, Jan 26, 2009.

  1. Ziffy

    Ziffy TPF Noob!

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    Greetings guys! I appreciate the feedback some of you gave me previously. I went out and shot some stuff today (I mostly messed around with light and how it would react to the camera at different angles/exposures). I took my two favorite shots and uploaded them for you guys to see.

    I also included this other shot I took recently my first day.

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  2. TheUndisputed

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    I like them, White balance seems to be off on the first and second one, and on the second one, I think you should have set the focal point closer to the camera. It is such a small focal point for such a large object.

    Good direction with the photos though. I love the third one.
     
  3. Ziffy

    Ziffy TPF Noob!

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    Thank you, thank you.

    I'll keep the larger focal point in mind for next time on a shot like that and see how it turns out.

    I'm curious though, what do you mean with the white balance being off in the first one? I understand the second one's balance is off (I did that intentionally, as well as mess with balance on the first, to give it a warmer look.) But are you saying it's a detractor?
     
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    1 is either underexposed or the WB is off. & 2&3 are over exposed...
     

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