New to forum, here's a few to critique

Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by electro35, Jan 7, 2007.

  1. electro35

    electro35 TPF Noob!

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    Hello, brand new to the forum, and I thought I'd post a couple pics for all you pro's to critique. These shots are from an old school Yashica Electro 35 GSN. On the black and white, a red filter was used. These are a few years old as I'm just getting back into photography and they're my best "work" to date, lol.

    Fireworks, July 4, 2002
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    Winter in Malta, NY, 2002
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    Boston
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  2. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Heya electro and welcome to ThePhotoForum ! :D

    I moved your thread to the General Gallery since it does not quite follow the guidelines of our Photo Critique section, which say one photo at a time (among other things).

    As to your photos taken some time ago: good.
    I like the black and white landscape!
    And the fireworks came out nice.
    I don't think I ever ventured into photographing fireworks when I still took photos exclusively on film...
     
  3. electro35

    electro35 TPF Noob!

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    sorry about that. Thanks for moving it.
     
  4. electro35

    electro35 TPF Noob!

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    Anyone else. What about the composition on the second one? The trees in the third, do they add anything, or just a distraction.
     
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    i think 3 needs a constast boost maybe, and a tight cropping around number one might help,number 2 i really like though, good job :D:D:D
     
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    I like the first shot.
     

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