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  1. A.S.H.rimp

    A.S.H.rimp TPF Noob!

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    Hey all!
    I'm new to the Forums, and was wondering what everyone here thinks of this shot:


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    Let me know how I can improve!
    Thanks...
    -Andrew
     
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    hehe that's one nice shot. I have actually never seen a cat sleeping outside under the sun before.
     
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    It's a nice photo indeed. But if you want my opinion I think that the cat is taking up to much of the photo. I know it's the main subject but I feel like the camera should have been a little further away from the cat. Just my view of things. But the picture is nice :)
     
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    IMO, DOF is spot on.

    Composition is nice, although I really don't like that beam.

    And the whites are blown out...
     
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    Thanks all for the replies!
    You definitely helped me to see problems. :) Hmmm... Maybe I can get the cat to do that again, and I'll have another try. :)
     
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    You took the words right out of my mouth... "it must have been while you were kissin' me."

    Not the second part so much (that's awkward), but it's from a good song and one I think of everytime I think of the phrase.
     

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