new to photography looking for opinion

[pinkhouse]

check out my pics tell me what you think

and this one

thanks

 

[dewey]

I like the second one best. I like the idea of #1 but it's a bit grainy - what was it taken with?

Dewey

 

[LaFoto]

Hiya Pinkhouse, welcome to ThePhotoForum.

I went into your first post and edited so the photos show right here, not only as links but as pictures. You will find that more people care to look at them when they don't have to take a second step to reach them.

Plus I moved your post from Photo Critique over to the General Gallery, since we have some fairly strict guidelines for the Photo Critique while you are asking for some general thoughts on your pictures only. That is what the galleries are there for, see?

Are both of these scanned b+w prints that you yourself made in the darkroom?

 

[quad b]

i like the second one aswell. they'd both be better without the date on them

 

[mpdc]

Agree with the first. The concept is good. The grainyness a tad much.

Keep trying.

And as alsways have fun.

 

[pinkhouse]

actually they are both scanned that i made in dark room sorry about the links i wasnt sure how to post it

 

[jacull]

Pink -

both of your photos have a great feel to them. I'm excited to see more of your shots. Keep shooting, keep learning, keep us posted!

JC

 

[Jeepnut28]

get the date stamp off of them for one......they have a good feel to them, maybe applying a little better exposure techniques would make them better