New to the forum

[aloysious]

Hello all,

New to the forum and I figured I might as well start submitting some pieces for review...

thanks in advance

 

[peanut170]

Im a noob myself, but i think these are ok, a little off in spots like a couple of the lighters are oof, but its an interesting shot, and the girl drinking, the colors are a little off but i think its a great idea, if you woulda got the sunglass logo in focus it could work for an magazine ad. And i thinkn you did good on the portrait as well, the eyes look nicely focused to me, some will hate on the selective color, but each there own ya know.

 

[MrBarney]

I think you've got a really good eye for light and composition.

As peanut said, some minor depth of field issues - the top of the green lighter should be in focus for example.