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  1. aloysious

    aloysious TPF Noob!

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    Hello all,

    New to the forum and I figured I might as well start submitting some pieces for review...

    thanks in advance

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  2. peanut170

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    Im a noob myself, but i think these are ok, a little off in spots like a couple of the lighters are oof, but its an interesting shot, and the girl drinking, the colors are a little off but i think its a great idea, if you woulda got the sunglass logo in focus it could work for an magazine ad. And i thinkn you did good on the portrait as well, the eyes look nicely focused to me, some will hate on the selective color, but each there own ya know.
     
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    I think you've got a really good eye for light and composition.

    As peanut said, some minor depth of field issues - the top of the green lighter should be in focus for example.
     

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