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  1. smokeonthwatr

    smokeonthwatr TPF Noob!

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    im new to this forum havent been into photography very long but i love it already... here to get some advice on photos and try to help others as well so please be brutally honest and i hope to be here for a while thanks!

    here is a picture i took today

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  2. cal_gundert05

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    Welcome to the forum.

    I see you've been experimenting with depth of field (DOF)...you're already ahead of the curve!

    P.S. I like your username :D
     
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    errrr, well its a start..lol, its creative, but try going for something a little more apealing to the eye.
     
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    Alex_B No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    to me this image has balance in a way, and it nicly plays with DOF.

    Howeveri t appears a bit dark/dull and colours are not really ppleasing. But in particular the latter are more a problem of the scene depicted than of the shot itself. certainly some better light could have helped, but still a pseudo-wooden table isn't the best to start with.

    Could work as a high contrast b&W as here the colours don't matter
     
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    abraxas No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Nice shot & the above.
     
  6. smokeonthwatr

    smokeonthwatr TPF Noob!

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    thanks guys really appretiate it im not too good at editing photos

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    BoblyBill TPF Noob!

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    Only thing that I would fix with the B&W (black and white) is to move the object of focus up more and to the left just a tad... I really like the idea of this. I had the impression that there was a message about being out of focus with my finances or something like that. If there wasn't a message oh well :)
     
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    Those out of focus glasses are kinda annoying... I like them,but they should be in focus. Rather then the coins...But both if them would be cool.
     
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    I can't see your image.
     
  10. terri

    terri Administrator Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Hi, I've moved this thread to the General gallery where general comments and critique are appropriate. Please refer to the Critique forum's FAQ's for guidelines on what to post there.

    Thank you. :)
     
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    hope you dont mind i did this... let me know how you like this edit...

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