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  1. timlair

    timlair TPF Noob!

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    Hey everyone, just found your forum today. Where have i been all my life? Ive spent 3 hours at least just browsing! Figured I'd post a few shots I've taken the last few months that I liked. Would love to hear your criticism! ;)
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    BTW, my flickr, http://www.flickr.com/photos/timlair
     
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  2. Robin Usagani

    Robin Usagani Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    #2 is in Colorado?
    #3 Doesnt do anything to me plus the ball is out of focus
    #4 I think you need to crop it a lot tighter
     
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    white TPF Noob!

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    I like #4. I would crop it to a square:

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    love #4
     
  5. KmH

    KmH Helping photographers learn to fish Supporting Member

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    I'm liking #4 too, but all the negative space is just useless, IMO. Make your subject, the subject.

    I'd crop and warm it a touch:

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    I like the contrast, the simplicity, and the sharp lines of #2. Perhaps a taller crop though.
     
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    Derrel Mr. Rain Cloud

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    'Sup Tim??!!

    Welcome. I too like the grasses against the dark field area. Neat shot. hope to see you around here more!
     
  8. timlair

    timlair TPF Noob!

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    Hey guys, thanks a lot for all the feedback! To answer a few questions, yes number 2 is in CO Springs at the US Air Force Academy back earlier this summer. Number 1 is the KC royals stadium the other night.

    And for all the comments on number 4, its actually the moons reflection off a local lake here. I liked how I could focus the shot on the grass but still get the glow coming off the lake. Ill take all the advice into consideration!
     
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    i really like them for the one with the soccer ball i wonder what it would look like in color
     
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    timlair TPF Noob!

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    Hello fellow Kc one! I love them all except # 3!
     
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    timlair TPF Noob!

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    How are you enjoying the weather!?
     

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