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Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by Cybermg703, Aug 9, 2008.

  1. Cybermg703

    Cybermg703 TPF Noob!

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    New to photography, here are some pics of my car that i took. Please leave feedback it would be greatly appreciated!
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  2. yugamu

    yugamu TPF Noob!

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    #1). Roll up the windows. Horizon isn't level. Car is too close to the center. The car lost it's body lines. I do like the location.

    #2). Turn off the lights and the Foreground weeds are distracting.

    #3). The lighting is nice. Too many highlights on the paint.

    #4). The car is at the wrong end of the shot(nose pointing out of the shot).

    #5). Get closer to the car. Decent angle. Car is too dark(lost all definition on the backbumper.

    I would offer an edit, but it says you don't want them. Keep clicking you only getting better with practice. Remember to take my critique with a grain of salt(I'm not a professional).
     
  3. Cybermg703

    Cybermg703 TPF Noob!

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    thanks alot yugamu!
     

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