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Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by HostileM6, Jan 23, 2009.

  1. HostileM6

    HostileM6 TPF Noob!

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    Hey guys. I'm new on this forum, mainly because all the other ones i was on never critiqued my work so it got frustrating. Hopefully this is a bit better. I've had my Rebel XS since xmas so bare with me, but dont go easy. I want to get better.

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  2. teneighty23

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    nice Mazda! and i really like your Pond picture, such nice dark blacks. im no pro so i will leave critiques for others.
     
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    Hi there and welcome to the forum.

    1. You have too much negative space above and below the car and not enough on the right. I'd also adjust the levels a bit and bring out those whites and light greys. You need to play a bit with your angles and lighting, if a light is too dark on one side, walk around.

    2. Makes me drool. Spectacular angle.

    3. Composition is great. Your centre alignment and rotation are a bit off. The wheel on the right hand side is shot slightly lower than the one on the left.

    4. There are a few sparkly hot spots above the mirror.

    You inspired me to go out and try shooting a car :D
     
  4. HostileM6

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    thanks for the C&C.
    as for number three, it looks that way because of the two different wheel sizes and profiles of the tires. at least that would be my logical answer but i could be wrong.

    number 4, those were xmas lights on my house, didnt think much of em, nor did i notice them.

    thanks again.
     

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