Newbie C&C Please.

[saphoto]

Carnival ride at the state fair.

 

[doogan]

I like your photo #1 but there are a couple of
things you need to attend to. It seems her
shirt is over exposed and lacking in detail, which
I don't quite understand because the wall
doesn't have too much exposure.

The other thing I notice is the sharpness of
your subject, which is lacking. I don't know
if this is caused by camera shake or focusing
troubles. Her face doesn't appear to be in
sharp focus and her right hand appears blurred.
These things could be caused by something else
also, so hopefully someone will post here who
can zero in on this problem.

I quite like your choice of background and your
model, makes for an interesting picture.

In photo #2 I didn't know what the subject was
until you told us. Seems to me if you experimented
with different shutter speeds you would get one
that shows motion blur, yet the viewer would know
what the subject was. The object at the bottom
of the picture was a distraction for me. I think with
a few of these technical things out of the way you
would be shooting some very good photos.
Cheers, Bob
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