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Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by Sand_On_The_Breeze, Mar 24, 2005.

  1. Sand_On_The_Breeze

    Sand_On_The_Breeze TPF Noob!

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    Hi, I'm new to photography. Just looking for suggestions on how I can improve. Thanks in advance

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    I think for this one, I shouldn't have centred the Renaissance Centre (the big building in the middle)
     
  2. K_OS

    K_OS TPF Noob!

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    Great photos, The only thing I would change at this moment is what you commented about... not putting the large building in the center, but don't worry, I still think that it works, because you broke your horizon correctly.
     
  3. jasonmac

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    Slight compositional changes aside (I don't like the pole lining up with the bridge tower in the first shot), I think you have a solid set of shots here. Nice work. You're doing a lot of things right, just get out and shoot heaps.
     
  4. tonysmyth

    tonysmyth TPF Noob!

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    We live in the same place or at least take pictures in the same place. I like the bridge shot. If you go further down the river you can get the same great sunsets with the bridge and people in the summer.

    Tony
    Windsor, Ontario
     
  5. Bimmie

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    You're on a good road
    Try some different angles is all I can say

    You'll poke it
     
  6. photo gal

    photo gal TPF Noob!

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    Nice work! All I can say is take more photos!!! : )
     
  7. Sand_On_The_Breeze

    Sand_On_The_Breeze TPF Noob!

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    Thanks for the suggestions all. There was something about the sunset pic which was bothering me but didn't know what. Now that you mention the post lined up with the bridge, i can see why.

    Nice to see there are other people from Windsor here.
     
  8. mentos_007

    mentos_007 The Freshmaker!

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    woohoo first one is amazing... I think you don't need our help :D:D
     
  9. lathamemmons

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    The sky is crazy in the first one its my fav good work
     
  10. Ghoste

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    Did you say you are new to this? =p
     
  11. aprilraven

    aprilraven TPF Noob!

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    i personally love the city shot..looks like one in a magazine...i think its great..
    and you seem to have a good eye...just keep shooting...good job!
     

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