Newbie here looking for feedback!

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  1. msgsti217

    msgsti217 TPF Noob!

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    Let me know what you guys think! Don't afraid to be mean, I can take it :)

    Beach STI

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    Beach Volleyball
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    Porsche Emblem

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    The Lake

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    read the thread about posting pics for C&C pick 4 to post

    post ones you would like to have critiqued
     
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    okay, updated first post with some photos

    Tell me what you think :)
     
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    I really like the last one. The colors really pop out for me. The clouds look amazing and you got the sun without it effecting the photo's quality...
     
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    thanks, that's one of my favorites too :D
     
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    wow.. your a noobie?? this pics are great!

    #1 is a little bit to dark for my liking,
    #2 is wonderful except for the left side of the photo.. i would maybe crop it out all together.
    #3 doesnt really interest me, but its a decent shot
    #4 is great, the colors are amazing... where you using a fisheye on this?
     
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    #1 - The horizon is not level and the image is slightly underexposed.

    #2 - The horizon is not level but I like the silhouettes.

    #3 - Subject is too centered in the frame...boring.

    #4 - Don't really care for this image.
     
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    1.- just a tad more exposure would be helpful, very nice subject and composition though. I feel sorry for the carpets in your car if you got out to take that one.

    2.-I'm a sucker for the copper sunset/silhouette photos. The color is stunning, great job on the silhouette, but straighten the horizon.

    3.-Nice picture as far as exposure/contrast, but it does not tell a story.

    4.-I'm not sure what settings/filters you used here, or maybe a little too much Photoshop? My least favorite of the group.
     
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    i know I shouldn't be giving away any secrets, but here's the first photo unedited.

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    but shhhh, don't tell anyone! ;)
     
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    just wondering, but are we allowed to post more further down in the thread or do they have to be in the first post? I'd like to get some more critiques but don't want to start another thread.
     
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    You can start a new thread if you want C&C for new pictures. Or you can put them in this thread. Up to you.
     
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    Haha, nice PS work on the STI.

    Love the 2nd image. When I look at it, it makes me think of robot-humans just wandering around. Weird analysis, i know. haha.

    3rd one is a quality image, but not very interesting.

    4th image is fantastic. The blue of the sky and the burst of the sun are amazing. I don't care if its over-indulgent :)
     

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