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  1. Joi

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    For your 3rd picture you could move more to the left and capture a vertical shot, I think that would create a more powerful composition.
     
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    I like the tone of colors,
    the light is Ok
    and need a bit of better composition like Sebastian Riel Ph. pointed out.
    (#1 is well composed)
    But over all, good job!:thumbup:
     
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    I really like #1, you almost had it with #3. I dislike the vacancy sign on #4 though. the photo has a really nice feel to it (don't know how else to explain it) until you see the vacancy sign. that's just me though. maybe if you shot from a different location you wouldn't have gotten the sign/fence. I don't know the circumstances though. otherwise, I REALLY like the lighthouse =)
     
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    I don't see any photos.
     
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    I think the vacancy sign makes the pic. Would have preferred less sky.
    Good start.
     
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    I thought the first image was a great shot, but it could have been even better without the boat. You had great atmosphere with the mist, a secluded lake great natural tones but then there is that giant boat. IMHO lol.
    The third shot I feel similar to the first about the boat but this boat at least gives some perspective as to size. Like the eggs/nest, nice find. And a lovely sharp shot of the house but the sign is the very first thing my eye is drawn too. Stronger image without it.
     
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    Great photo area... the first one is your best composition. :thumbup:
     
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    the lighthouse and sign are on purpose and were shot for a job, after all don't you sell your work??? the first shot is the winning cover shot for a calendar and the kayak picture and eggs are just random shots :)
     

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