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  1. Armstror

    Armstror TPF Noob!

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    :hug:: Hello all! I'm new here and I have many images I'd like to be looked at, but here are a select few I've chosen from my bunch for you to look at. Please give me a little feedback, even though this isn't the critique forum. Thanks! (I hope they're not too big.)

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    This is Sven! One of my projects for school was to find different lighting situations using this mannequin. I got fed up with it and decided to stage a little scene of my own. What do you think?

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    Same concept, do you think it's too dark?

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    Touched it up and cleaned it up a little in Photoshop, what do you think?

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    I dunno, it reminds me of Fairies! I like that kind of thing. :p What do you think of the composition?

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    Last one! I swear! Tried flower photography. I like the colors. :3
     
  2. mentos_007

    mentos_007 The Freshmaker!

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    really nice pictures! welcome aboard!!!
     
  3. Chiller

    Chiller Mental case

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    Great work. Sven is a little dark in the second pic, but it might be my monitor here at work. Love the last shot too. Welcome to the form.
     
  4. Rob

    Rob TPF Noob!

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    Welcome to the forum.

    I think the composition of your images is good, with the exception of the flower shot, which is a bit too.... well... "there it is". The rule of thirds is probably worth bearing in mind, and perhaps a bit of off-centredness would improve it.

    A good start though - I look forward to seeing more of your pictures.

    Rob
     
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    kilifila66 TPF Noob!

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    I really like the shot of the lane with trees. Very nice use of lines. I like the flower shot too, but it might not be a bad idea to change perspective and shoot it from a lower angle. Maybe focusing the background in a bit might work too. I like the color saturation on the flower too. The manequin stuff is a little off my radar in terms of abstractness, those shots always seem cluttered to me for some reason. Nice shots, can't wait for more.
     
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    SLOShooter TPF Noob!

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    Welcome, and all the conotations that go along with that.
     
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    aprilraven TPF Noob!

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    some of these are really good....i love the hyacinth...great color and clarity...great shot...
     
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    I think you need to be locked up! Poor Sven! He's going to have a monster headache. :(

    I like those last ones. The one with the path the most. Great colours and I'm going to come back to this thread tonight when I can see them better (light on the monitor right now). :thumbup:

    Welcome to the forum. :)
     
  9. Armstror

    Armstror TPF Noob!

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    Thanks you guys! ^_^ I'm glad to be here.
     
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    JonMikal TPF Noob!

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    very nice work. welcome aboard and keep posting!
     

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