Newbie shots

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  1. miguellara78

    miguellara78 TPF Noob!

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    Hi guys, I'm new to DSLR and Photography, I got my camera last friday, gave a quick read to the manual and went outside to take some shots.
    So what should I keep of the following shots or are all garbage?
    I found that due to the lack of experience with my camera, or as matter of fact with the lack of photography knowledge, I had some exposure problems, that's what I know; what else do you guys notice?
    Thank you for your C&C, really appreciated.

    #1 Wife shot
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    #2 Another Wife Shot
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    #3 Tank tower
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    #4 Dying Rose
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    #5 Flower
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    #6 Another Flower
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    #7 Weird Plant
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    #8 Aloevera Flower
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    #9 Living among the Dying
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    #10 Hospital
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    #11 Hospital close-up
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    #12 Yet another flower
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    #13 Lonelly
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    #14 Duck w/chicks
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    #15 flying
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    #16 More flying
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    #17 Landing
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    #18
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    I like #11 and a few of the pics with the gulls in them
     
  3. Sarah23

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    I like #2 the best, except you cut off her fingers, and her arm looks a bit weird...I think it was just a weird angle of it. :)

    Good start!!!
     
  4. miguellara78

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    Thank you for the feedback guys.

    Sahara23, her arm looking weird is not the angle of the camera, Is just the extreme flexibility of my wife's arm lol.
    I always do comments of how flexible she is, she says that it's normal on Russians.
    Thank you again and the more C&C the better.
     
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    Shot 1 would have been better if there wasn't that thing coming out the top of your wifes head and her hands werent cut off.

    Shot 10 and 11 are cool, and the flying bird ones are ok but practice them some more.:thumbup:
     
  6. miguellara78

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    Ok, I'll work more in composition.

    In the flying birds, what did I do wrong? exposure? needs to be more sharper or the shot itself is not that good?

    Thank you guys.
     

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