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    There's nothing much in the way of subject matter and the reeds in the foreground are distracting, I reckon your a youngster, look for some decent subjects, go in close (2 - 10 ft) shoot anything, leaves,people,animals, plants etc. H
     
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    Just looked at your album, some of the other shots are very good. H
     
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    thanks for feedback, I'm not that young but young to photography! Which ones did you like?
     
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    I find the pic lightly over exposed and under-saturated.

    The sky has a weak blue feel to it and the rocks are not easily seen as separate entities due to light lack of detail because of a touch too much light.

    Interesting how the grass cuts up the pic, but getting in a little closer and tighter with your subject will increase interest.

    Right now, I am not sure what the object being photographed is... is it the grass, the rocks, the opening of the channel of water in the middle?
     
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    nice
     
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    thanks to all feedback, the subject was the reeds/grass actually, i see what you mean about over exposed.. it was a very sunny day.. also i quite liked the scorched white feel to the stones!
     

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