Newborn....cc por favor.

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  1. cailinp

    cailinp TPF Noob!

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    Here is a shot of my very first shoot ever. Just me and my camera. I am a total newbie at all of this so any pointers, thoughts would be great. I think the focus is a bit off. Also what do you think of the "look"? Thanks.

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    Look great, beautiful baby.
     
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    There is something strange going on with focus on this one. It doesn't seem to be sharp anywhere but maybe thats because the frame is a bit overexposed. The focus maybe somewhere in the white area. Also maybe a bit wider crop so you wouldn't cut off part of his/her head.

    Just my thoughts...
     
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    I love the lighting. U should post more though. I'm not sure if I like the pose but baby is precious! How did u set this up?
     
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    I wouldve shot straight on but a little below for the eyes. I feel this is an uncomfortable pose. Not a lot of contrast, the blanket blends in somewhat with back ground. Good try tho.
     
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    any more from the session?




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    I think the baby is adorable and i love the concept for the shot. I wish you wouldn't have cut the top of the baby's head off and a straight on shot might have been better.

    That's just my two cents.
     
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    Thanks all. Here are some more. Let me know what you think.

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    love it
     
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    you should have posted these the first time around. I like them alot.
    I wish his head wasn't cut off on the first couple. And I like the tighter crop of the one of him in the basket but I wish you didn't cut the basket out on the right.
    I love the ring/breastfeeding photo.
    The last one is my least favorite.
     
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    I know, I know! I am a major head cutter off-er. It's a bad habit. I like the look of the imperfect picture but I always forget that most people don't. Your right about the basket being cut off too. I wish it wasn't. Thanks for the cc!
     

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