Newborn TWINS!!! harder than you think.

[joecoulsonphotography]

The first one has a red cast and also seems soft? Or oof. I also feel like you might not need the vingetting here because its casting a weird "shadow" on their chest which is unnecessary.. (same can be said for #2 also)

#2 is really sweet, I'd ditch the vingette though

No red cast, baby on left was bawling and I was timing shots inbetween the bawls. He was so red that this shot is almost completely desaturated and then warmth added. I had to have some color shots for the clients but it was hard with one looking like a beet the whole time. Thanks for the C&C but I like the vignette's (it's my style)

here is the original

 

[joecoulsonphotography]

There was one other child at this shoot and after some critique from peer pro's they think this shot was the best?

 

[kellylindseyphotography]

I know how hard it is to get newborn skin correct. There is still a distinct red/orange/yellow cast going on in that shot.
Its great that vingetting is "your style".. as it is many photog's... just knowing when to back off it is important too IMO.
The shot w/the little boy is def the best but again the crowdign of the vingette on the chest area bothers me. *shrug*

 

[heavenlymom]

Adorable! I think you did great! That last photo is just so sweet, it'll be one the mom will treasure for years to come.