Nicci & Jon Wedding (10 images)

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  1. AprilRamone

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    This is my 4th wedding. They only hired me for the ceremony and formals. They got married at a little chapel at the University of Denver which is a really pretty old college.
    C & C are greatly appreciated as I want to get really good at weddings:)

    Thanks!

    1.) I have issues with WB as I don't shoot in RAW since Elements can't handle it. (I know I know....I really need to get a full version of PS). If there isn't anything white in a picture, I have a hard time fixing it.
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    3.) Had to do all of the indoor shots with a 50 MM 1.4 I have such a hard time focusing with that lens when it's wide open like that. I was allowed to use flash during the ceremony, but I feel like it is too distracting and I hate how it looks anyway.
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    6.) We did all of the formals outside of the Chapel as it was reall dark and it had these chandeliers that hung REALLY low. So low that I could reach up and touch them. It made doing the aisle pictures sooo hard! We also had to rush because it was starting to rain!
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    I like 8 and 10 the best personally..

    On 8, however, you might want to try and clone out that tattoo on her shoulder. At least it looks like a tattoo.. Unless she specifically wanted it in the picture.. My eyes were drawn to it..
     
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    Yep, that was my thoughts too. It's an excellent picture, easily my favourite, but mr_baseball is right. Your eyes get drawn to the tattoo.
     
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    You need to fix the CA you're getting on the windows in the last one.

    otherwise, 8 is easily the best becuase of the short DOF.
     
  5. AprilRamone

    AprilRamone TPF Noob!

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    Thanks for the comments you guys. I think I will clone out her tattoo when using it on my website and portfolio, but I will keep it in for her.

    Switch, what does CA mean?
     
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    Yes what is CA? LOL
    I love the last three they are my favoriteS!!! Good job, hope I do half as well on Sunday!
     
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    CA = Chromatic aberration which is color fringing which usually happens between 2 very contrasting colors or wavelengths...and ditto to what's been said about #8
     
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    White. Balance. It MUST be consistant.
     
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    April,
    I love ya, so here is what you need to do:
    1; Wonderful emotional shot but it way way way too magenta. Back it down. This would look terrific in BandW
     
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    No change....I love it.
     
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    3.4.5.6 Out of focus. I do it too.
     
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    8 is wonderful. Top notch.
    9 s out of fucus
    0 doesn't have the right white balance.
     

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