nicest and easiest/ Is it better now?

[mmaria]

before

after

 

[goooner]

NIce image, but he is a she ;-)

 

[mmaria]

NIce image, but he is a she ;-)

oh lol Thank you!

 

[DanOstergren]

I like the light and the added tones, as well as her pose and the overall mood. A couple things that catch my eye though: the strand of hair leaving the frame on the left side disrupts the composition for me; perhaps clone it so that the strand ends before reaching the edge of the frame. As well, the skin editing looks a little overdone to me; perhaps reduce the opacity of your dodge layer.

 

[Gary A.]

I really like it. Dan's points are well taken. The skin tone seems to be a wee bit on the green side where I want to see pink. But I really like it.

 

[mmaria]

I like the light and the added tones, as well as her pose and the overall mood. A couple things that catch my eye though: the strand of hair leaving the frame on the left side disrupts the composition for me; perhaps clone it so that the strand ends before reaching the edge of the frame. As well, the skin editing looks a little overdone to me; perhaps reduce the opacity of your dodge layer.

This was meant to be a horizontal portrait, but when I cropped it like this the hair was cropped also, although I don't mind that that much.
Bigger concern is skin editing for me... I'm not good at it. I'll try to reduce dodge layer and see how it'll be. Thank you!

I really like it. Dan's points are well taken. The skin tone seems to be a wee bit on the green side where I want to see pink. But I really like it.

I'll try to add some red in the skin and check out the green you mentioned

Very nice shot. I don't agree about the hair, it doesn't distract me, but I do agree about the skin tone. Overall a very nice image!

thank you...I'll try to fix the skin

 

[FITBMX]

She is lovely! I agree with Dan, but this is a great photo!

 

[Watchful]

She could be Lily Munster.

 

[mmaria]

She is lovely! I agree with Dan, but this is a great photo!

yeah, we all agreed with Dan... I'll fix it

She could be Lily Munster.

yeah, totally

 

[manaheim]

I was thinking the same thing as Dan and was hoping it was just me.

It' absolutely lovely otherwise.

 

[mmaria]

I was thinking the same thing as Dan and was hoping it was just me.

It' absolutely lovely otherwise.

Hey you!

glad to see you here

and thanks!

 

[oldhippy]

Love the dream like mood, and china doll skin tones. Ed

 

[manaheim]

I was thinking the same thing as Dan and was hoping it was just me.

It' absolutely lovely otherwise.

Hey you!

glad to see you here

and thanks!

Hi mmaria!! Glad to be seen!

 

[jcdeboever]

Stunning

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[manny212]

Love the image , the mood , the pose . The hair doesn't really bother me , the skin might be a bit overcooked .