Night at the Beach

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  1. Kyle-Cox

    Kyle-Cox TPF Noob!

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  2. jadin

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    Panoramic that baby. Lots of 'wasted' space above and below.
     
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    I really likek this shot. I agree with jadin, cut some of the top and bottom and I think you will be good to go.
     
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    This is a great shot but definately crop it a little. Dark space is nice but it is a little overbearing there.

    That water is fantastic, did you use any filters?
     
  5. Kyle-Cox

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    Here's pretty much the same shot, just with a 30second exposure which I don't like as much. Too much of a surreal feeling like a unicorn should be walking by. And no, no filters were used, the blue lighting in the forround came from a restaurant that has a lit up section of the beach behind it.
     
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    wow, i like both shots, but agree about cropping the first one...

    it's pretty amazing that the 2nd shot is real, since it is so "unicorn-ish"

    both fantastic shots in their own way :)
     
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    Prefer the 1st - I'd just cut the bottom off.
     
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    What I was thinking of for the crop (let me know if you want it removed) :

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  9. Alison

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    I love the colors here. I was thinking along the same lines as Jadin for a crop, more panoramic.
     
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    After seeing it, I am with Jadin and Alison. Roxorz.
     
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    Thanks, and no problem with you posting the crop. I was gonna do it but you got to it first :wink:
     
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    wow the colors are so nice!!
     

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