night scen, pls c&c, thank you

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    Hi, i took a photo of night scene. eager to know your feeling on it. Thanks for your critiques and comments.
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    Exposure: 5s
    Aperture: f/4.5
    Focal Length: 6 mm
    ISO Speed: 80
     
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    Having the photo usually helps us critique it.
     
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    yea, I agree. LOL
     
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    Sorry, i previewed it and see the photo when i first post it. don't know why.
     
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    Overall, not too bad of a photo, but it does seem tilted to me.
     
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    Not bad, though you need to sort that tilt out.
     
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    Fix the tilt like everyones said, but I like the picture, nice view! :thumbup: I think I'd like it more though if the branches at the top didn't hang so low, mainly the ones in the middle that hang down the lowest.
     
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    Thank you for your suggestion. what software do you suggest to rotate it. i tried to rotate it with picasa and found out the quality decrease a lot. here is the result.[​IMG]
     
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    Thank you for your suggestion. personally, i like the style of the tree. it has a kind of style of Chinese painting, so i included a large part of them. i think what you said is right, the composition of them are not good, and maybe it will give us a feeling of depression. i should take the tress as a theme in another shot. and leave more space between the branches and the distant light. Thank you again.
     
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    I don't know why, but I don't like the tree branches at the top. Maybe it's sort of a contrasting kind of thing. But it doesn't appeal to me. But I love the warm amber color.
     
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    are those fires?
     
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    The amber color is the color of the cloud, i think it is due to the reflection of the city light. Thank you for your comment.
     

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