Nike 6.0

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  1. photo28

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    28mm
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    30mm
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    28mm
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    Critique away.

    All shot with Sony 18-70mm kit lens
     
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    No comments? Anything please!
     
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    The picture looks good techincally.. It just doesnt do anything for me.. Kind of bland I guess.. but you did a good job shooting. The contrast and quality look good.
     
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    Thanks, that was mainly what I was aiming for... composition, lighting... all the technical stuff. more of a product shot :lol:
     
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    Right on man
     
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    Technically? Bang-on. Artistically? Ummmmm...
     
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    Haha, thank you, exactly what I was looking for.
     
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    I really like how the light on the outside starts to get hotter and hotter , if that makes any sense. It brings the attention even closer to the shoes.

    Actually , I have a picture I took of my Nike 6.0s as well , is it alright if I posted it here to show you?
     
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    The only thing I see in this is what seems to me is a weak composition. Its a kinda shot that strikes me as a show-case kinda thing to display the shoes and a tile floor/surface does them no justification IMO.
     
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    maybe shoot on a solid background or something insted of the floor??
     

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