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  1. vonnagy

    vonnagy have kiwi, will travel...

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    can't think of title for this and not sure about what to think about picture, so tell me your thoughts.
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  2. oriecat

    oriecat work in progress

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    I almost really like it. I think I would like it better as a vertical or a square, cropping out that thing in the back. It draws my eye too much, but it's hard to tell much of what it is or see enough detail in it to really make it interesting. As is, it just sort of annoys me how it keeps making me look at it when I don't want to. Know what I mean?
     
  3. vonnagy

    vonnagy have kiwi, will travel...

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    thanks orie, you rule. My eye really wanted to include the island whilst taking the photo, but simplifying the processed is prolly what the doc ordered.. I like the square crop idea :D

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    oriecat work in progress

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    That's what I'm talkin' 'bout. 8) Nice! :)
     
  5. Gatsby

    Gatsby TPF Noob!

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    I agree with Oriecat about the square crop - looks brilliant! If it were mine (ha, I ain't this good yet) I would take out that little boat (?) on the horizon about 2/3rds the way across.....

    Just mvho!
     
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    Gatsby TPF Noob!

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    PS.... "Pier-ing into the Distance??"
     
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    Nice one
     

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