Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by trodgers, Feb 15, 2005.
what do you think and can you help me out with the sequencing?
Usually for critique it helps to just post one pic I like the first, it's very dramatic. The lighting really adds to it. There is a part in the top left hand corner that could be burned in a little more (make it darker). The second one seems too dark overall, and doens't provide teh feel that the first does. It's hard for me to tell on the last b/c it's running into the second pic. I think it could use more contrast, there's no real whites in it, sort of just overall grey. Hopefully that helps a bit.
A little Man Ray! I think you are on to something. The noir lights effect should be much brighter. This will give your subject more freedom in the highlight and shadow area.
made some changes on these...
thanks for the critiques.
I really like the first one although I'm not a fan of b&w but for me,,, it works perfectly here
of the 3 i like the first one the best too. the mood kinda creeps me out though... sorta looks like a dead person or something. there is no detail to point to any other emotion, for me, other then creepy
sorry, that i have no useful feedback
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