North Beach

Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by colinL, Mar 12, 2007.

  1. colinL

    colinL TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Mar 12, 2007
    Messages:
    11
    Likes Received:
    0
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    Here are a few photos from the North Beach district in SF. I really would like you to give honest critiques because I will be shooting SF architecture for the rest of the week. Thanks.

    [​IMG]

    [​IMG]
     
  2. craig

    craig TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Oct 30, 2003
    Messages:
    5,600
    Likes Received:
    20
    Location:
    Hermosa Beach, CA U.S.A
    Potential in the first frame, but I think there is too much going on. Maybe reshoot. It is a great location.

    Love the second shot! I enjoy the composition. I have a problem with the blur. Seems unnatural.

    Love and Bass
     
  3. The_Traveler

    The_Traveler Completely Counter-dependent Supporting Member

    Joined:
    Dec 11, 2006
    Messages:
    18,111
    Likes Received:
    7,458
    Location:
    Mid-Atlantic US
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos NOT OK to edit
    Great eye and good ideas.
    I would shoot these later in the day for better color, particularly in second one. Why not crop the right one a little tighter to eliminate the street stuff (it's not contributory) - 4 x6 isn't a sacred aspect ratio.
     
  4. colinL

    colinL TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Mar 12, 2007
    Messages:
    11
    Likes Received:
    0
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    Thanks, yes the blur is unnatural becuase I did it in PS haha. Thanks for all the critique though, I will keep it in mind.
     

Share This Page