North Beach

colinL

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Here are a few photos from the North Beach district in SF. I really would like you to give honest critiques because I will be shooting SF architecture for the rest of the week. Thanks.

NorthBeachGrunge.jpg


northbeachmural.jpg
 
Potential in the first frame, but I think there is too much going on. Maybe reshoot. It is a great location.

Love the second shot! I enjoy the composition. I have a problem with the blur. Seems unnatural.

Love and Bass
 
Great eye and good ideas.
I would shoot these later in the day for better color, particularly in second one. Why not crop the right one a little tighter to eliminate the street stuff (it's not contributory) - 4 x6 isn't a sacred aspect ratio.
 
Thanks, yes the blur is unnatural becuase I did it in PS haha. Thanks for all the critique though, I will keep it in mind.
 

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