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  1. eye-capture

    eye-capture TPF Noob!

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    Not sure what I can improve on this photo. I'm a fan of the dramatic lighting and bold shadows, kind of the look I was goin' for. As you can tell the 'focus' of this photo was mostly his tattoos and piercings.
     
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    Fizzy TPF Noob!

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    I don't see much that I'd improve there. I like the composition and lighting...

    It is already of a limited colour pallette which is effective in portraying the mood I think youre aiming for...

    What do you feel its missing?
     
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    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    To me this looks perfect.
    What more can you do?
    You wanted to go for this look of stark shadows and got it.
    You wanted to focus on his tattooes and piercings and they really show.
    His expression is good.
    I can't help but think there is nothing you need to do about this! It is perfect.
     
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    it is a nice image
     
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    It looks like he has half a head. Put a backlight on him to distinguish him from the background.
     
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    thank you to everyone for your time and input.

    i wish he was wearin' a lighter hat just so he doesnt look like he has half a head. i found that it was abit tight on the left side now that i think of it, but i mean i guess i got what iwanted! thank you!
     

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