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  1. ShelleySnapz

    ShelleySnapz Photographer for hire!

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    This is my gorgeous daughter Ariana...such a willing model for me!

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    woodsac TPF Noob!

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    I really like this shot Shelley!
    It's very natural. Nice bg blur...not too soft...and great tones!
     
  3. ShelleySnapz

    ShelleySnapz Photographer for hire!

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    photo gal TPF Noob!

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    Very nice shot Shelley and Ariana is so beautiful!!!! : )
     
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    Arch Damn You! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    nice one shelley, i like the tones you've used :thumbup:
     
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    M @ k o TPF Noob!

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    Yup she's gorgeous ! Nice photo and awesome frame and crop :thumbup:
     
  7. Christie Photo

    Christie Photo No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Yup... a cutie.

    As for a critique, I notice the line of the nose cuts across the left cheek-line. I suggest either turning her head slightly OR moving the camera slightly, so that we can see her left eye, but not the cheek. Pickin' nits, I know, but wanted to suggest that. Maybe some catch lights in the eyes?

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  8. ShelleySnapz

    ShelleySnapz Photographer for hire!

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    You nailed my 2 biggest concerns! LOL I wanted the catch lights but they just werent there! and yah she turned slightly away...good catch though!
     
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    JonK I want MORE!!

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    beautiful candid feeling moment. nice treatment too. :D
     

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