Nova Scotia, PEI Critique

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  1. Garrentee

    Garrentee TPF Noob!

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    Heres a few shots from my Holiday...I would love some critique on these!!


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    our cat was interested in the moose

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    Sorry theres so many...didnt realize there was so many!

    Thanks for looking!
     
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    lol I love how the cat is just staring at the moose in that one picture
     
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    Garrentee?

    There's a few minor exceptions, but pretty much, you've nailed 'em.

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    Great work, looks like you had fun.
     
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    Koda 46, Haha i know...she was so cute, we had the windows open and she was all over it!!

    Abraxas...Thank you so much!! Ive been working really hard on getting better...Id love to hear which ones you think needed help?
     
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    I can tell. Also, I bet you already know which one's I'd point out.

    but I will anyhow;

    #3 - obscured.

    #5 is cool, but wish you could have moved to the right, got the horse on the left and blocked out the powerpole.

    #7 cute. Cat's in the way though. :) I'm not a fan of mixing domesticated and wild animals in the same shot. You get one of just the moose?

    #8 tilted

    #9 two masts - just looks like it needs something under them. even numbered 'things' tend to look weird.

    #10 POV just an -eensy- lower would have blocked out vehicles.

    #15 Looks like a better shot is about 30ft ahead, without the white fence- maybe vertical.

    #17 - I would have liked to have seen a shot of the water action under the bridge and toward the bend in the river. Awesome light.

    The above are mostly nits, and you're getting better for sure. Overall I think you hit a lot of places and probably may want to try walking up to the shot closer.

    Now, favorites;

    1, 2 & 4 I like these quite a bit.

    6 - I'd spend all day there waiting for sunset and probably be back the next morning before sunrise.

    11, 12, 13 & 14 are really good too.

    16 & 18 likewise.

    Like the boat shots a lot with my favorite out of all of them being the very last- Dig that name!


    oh-oh gottago... the dogs got out. ... :smileys:
     
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    Love the color contrast in 3 & 10!!
     
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    Abraxas, WOW!!! That must have taken a year off you life, writing that critique, LOL...thanks for taking the time to give me those hints...most of those things i spaced on because of driving and constantly being on the move...you know how road trips are!!?

    Cabra..ty for the comments...3 caught my eye and i had to stop. that bush was so yellow!!
     

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