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  1. Shamir

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    ups! sorry about the topic! i didnt remember this one was an english forum!
    Hey guys,! Sup ? well im Shamir,and im new here from the Dominican Republic!
    Well the 26th i got my 1st Digital SLR, Canon EOS Digital Rebel XTi! and its been amazing, also with the 18-55, 75-300mm and a 50mm 1.8!

    took some shots with the 75-300 in a poor village i was visiting!
    Comments + criticism please
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  2. MyaLover

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    I love them, #2 is great, and they really tell a story. I like photos that put me there, and I can easily imagine what it would sound and feel to be there!
     
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    i like the first one a lot, but it seems your focus was on the open door rather than the lady.
     
  4. Shamir

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    THanks guys :D

    Im still having problems on focusing with that 75-300 because of the image shake!.. but ill get the hang of it one day =)

    Thanks again guys :)
     
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    As MyaLover mentioned, with these photos I feel as if I was really there... that's something many photographers try to achieve, and is sometimes more important than the technical aspect of the photo.
    With that said, thinking a bit more about your composition and point of focus could help a lot. Not bad though! Welcome to the forum!
     
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    hola!!... por lo menos yo si entendi el titulo jajajaja... yo soy de Mexico....

    so to keep folk on track, I said that I DID understand his topic as I am from Mexico, so I speak spanish too... LOL

    nice pics!! I also see the focus issue but overall it looks good to me...

    and dab_20: do I know you?? :p ;)... how funny isnĀ“t it...LOL
     
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    Gracias Husky!! =)!

    Thanks also Dab! yeah! i need to work more on focusing righT!
     
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    Most excellent subject and you capture it fairly well. Only slight complaints from me which echo what others have said....focusing issues and they way you frame your shots could use a wee bit moer preplanning. I know what you mean about camera shake with the longer lenses. I struggle with it myself. Get a tripod &/or a monopod to really help stabblize yourself.

    I too own a Rebel XTi, and for the money, its a great camera. Sure is fun owning one!

    Derrick
     
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    Diablo tigueraso, welcome to the forum. I'm Dominican also, Havent been to our beautiful island in 3 years now... its killing me, but I will be there soon. Bienvenido a la pagina viejo.
     
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    Hola and muy bueno! (That's all I know).

    The second photo is my favorite. In the future, please keep a mental note not to cut the feet of the subject in the photo. Still, you captured the scene so well, I didn't find myself caring that much.

    The third one is really good too. The intensity in his eyes is great, like he is a young Albert Pujols!!!

    Bienvenido to The Photo Forum!
     
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    Great shots! Keep them coming, per favor!
     
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    Thanks Again Guys =)
    Keeping tips in Mind =)

    Dime a ve Platano! klk xD?
     

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