October 13th Sunset - please critique

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  1. GerryDavid

    GerryDavid No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Absolutely positively number 1. The leading lines, the colors, the framing. Definately the best of the three. The other's would be "ok" had I not been shown the first one.
     
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    Great colors combining blue along with the warmth of the yellows and oranges. In my photos, they're usually either really warm or really blue. Nice work.
     
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    Really did not think much of the picture.....till I clicked on the larger image (seems to be a major nitpick with me lately) now I like it.

    Really have to go with the first picture, seeing the ducks, and more detail makes a difference.

    On the second picture you have two competing subjects, the park/ people which can barely be seen, and the sky. I would focus on one, which would be the sky, but that may be my own personal opinion.
     
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    Thanks for the comments everyone. The original was a bit more blue, I used levels and tweeked the red a tiny bit to make it a bit more interesting to look at. :0)
     

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