ok, 2 Photoshop edits

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  1. Dandy-Warhol

    Dandy-Warhol TPF Noob!

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    spank me for this you critics! :p

    I'll read your opinions when I wake up ;)
     
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    They both look nice, except:
    I am not sure what you did to them. Is one a source and other your product? or were they both ps-ed?

    maybe this is a good thing, if it looks real enough i dont know what you did.

    on the other hand, its hard to rate your work, because critisism is relative, and I have nothing to compare to.
     
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    These are both great ideas, but I think they can be improved upon some recomposition or cropping. In both images my eyes are drawn to the headlights, with are pretty close to the middle of the image. I'd like to see them not as centered, or at least some of the extra background trimmed out, like the leaves and dirt. Do you mind if I post a couple of crops as ideas?
     
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    The 1st pic would be a keeper without the car in it. The crop is off (there's no subject).

    The 2nd pic has the headlights as the nearest semblance to a main subject and they do not have a proper placement for a main subject.
     
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    Of course not. Ideas are always welcome, that's why I posted them :)
     
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    these are the originals

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    Here are a couple of ideas:

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    It might be cropped a little close on the bottom, but this works the best for me at the particular angle this picture was taken at.

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    The second one I rotated a bit.
     

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