Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by BadRotation, Apr 6, 2005.
What do you guys think, and what can I do better next time?
interesting angle. i'd like to see a black and white version (not sepia) actually. and i would suggest losing the border. or making it black or white.
i wonder how much more dramatic it would look if it you took the picture lower down (if possable)
I agree that neutral BW might do this image more justice by really bringing out the contrasts. (Sorry, I'm a big fan of contrast.)
My first reaction was that maybe the shot should be taken from higher or further away, so the camera wouldn't be pointed up so much... but after reading blitz' comment, I agree that it would be pretty dramatic if taken from a lower angle, possibly closer in, and maybe a wider angle lens (if you can do that).
Oh, and the border... darker and thinner.
Good shot. I like it.
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