Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by aymanalzarif, Mar 18, 2010.
Hi every body my first photo in this forum
Welcome! For me, it has a bit of distracting background. Also, what is he holding in his left hand? Maybe show a little lower instead of cropping so much.
Interesting subject. I would actually crop more. You have his head like absolute dead-center in the frame which is often kinda "meh" and you don't have our focus zoomed in on him enough. I would AGGRESSIVELY crop so we're in really close on him- possibly even so his face takes up like 1/4 of the frame. I would put his face more in the upper left, perhaps... it's a bit hard to tell with a smaller image like this, but I think that would give it more oomph.
hello aymanalzarif. nice candid photo.
I agree, I would also make a capture of a man, not only his head.
Crop it. and to make it more impressive- blend a little the background)))
overall, this is a nice work)
thanks all for your beneficial comments
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