Old Sailboat in SF Bay

[Toast95135]

I have a color version, but it seemed too busy. What do you think?

 

[LaFoto]

Pity about the top flag with so much water at the bottom.
Other than that I like the conversion and the range of tones it presents.
And the location and subject are, of course, extra special!

 

[MostlyDigital]

Hmm. Very cool. Is this cropped? Cuz the flag to the right is just nicked I am not very smart about tonal range and colors, but I feel that the boat is not distinguished enough from the background tone wise. Maybe I'm off.

 

[xfloggingkylex]

going along with what Lafoto said, you may want to crop some extra off the top so it isn't so obvious that the flag is missing.

Could you post the color just for comparison? It's a cool picture.

 

[Ranger]

I really like your photo, it makes me think of the Pirates of the Carribean!

I agree with the above, cropping would help with the flag.