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Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by osirus, Oct 7, 2007.

  1. osirus

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    and old ship that was set a fire

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    I like the B&W.

    Some nice lines and textures....but to me it feels like there is something missing..??? ...Maybe the same shot with some wild or interesting clouds??

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    Its interesting but the composition is a little too centred. Also the shade on the hull seems too strong and you've lost a lot of detail. I would recommend to play with the EV's.
     
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    I agree with JCPics, there is not enough detail in the shadows
     
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    Too much midtone, and not enough shadow and highlight detail. It also looks very digital, which suggests you might take another shot at the post-processing.
     
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    I like the way that the ship is leaning. That gives it an unsteady look. This adds to the fact that the ship is old and gives it the grunge that it needs.
    The water also has a nice tone to it. Thanks for the picture.
     

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