Old Smack

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  1. mentos_007

    mentos_007 The Freshmaker!

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    I like the use of the colours. I think the boat colours stand out well against the beach and the different blues. IMO, the brush infront works well also.

    Looks like the Professor finally fixed the boat. :lol:
     
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    I like your picture. Did you happen to take one moving a little more to the right so the grass is used also as foreground but not in front of the boat?
     
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    nice picture. i love the colors of the boat!
     
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    i agree with the Cruzin regarding the grass. awesome shot though - love the colors!
     
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    Yeah, moving slightly right is a good idea.

    This might be a rule of thirds situation. The foreground grass could be in the lower left third and the boat in the upper right third.

    my $.02
     

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